Sunday, 24 September 2017

Part Two Ellie


‘Caught it!’ Sophie said “now let’s find the Green Stone Eye!” The note said that the green stone eye was in there garden somewhere. “ Well we’ve gone to the neighbours house now, now we just have to look in our big garden, it’s going to take a while because our gardens too big huh”

💀Scary Garden🌺
They both went into the garden to explore. Behind them was… Their dad in a giant beetle vehicle and dad was so dramatic he looked as if he wanted to kill the two girls but quickly they both ran and the giant beetle bug went behind them. Sophie held up the ghost eye and shined it at her dad. The ghost eye suddenly became so bright that dad went out of control and the bug went crazy Sophie kept shining it at her.

Ellie kept running away but then she stopped, and looked behind her showing Sophie shining the ghost eye into him and suddenly the beetle goes crazy and Sophie dodges the giant bug vehicle and Ellie spots the Green Stone Eye by the left of her other dad’s side Ellie charges towards him “What on earth are you doing Ellie you're going to crash into him and maybe even die you know!” Sophie said “I just saw the stone eye by dad so I have to get it or else we are never going to get out evil button world”

👍Mission Complete, More to go🔎
“Catch” Ellie said “I got the green stone eye” Ellie said just as the Beetil falls into the river and the evil dad dies. Sophie and Ellie were panting and then a button shadow started appearing on the moon and little did they know was a bad sign if they don’t make it to their house before the shadow completely covers the moon, they will never get out of the evil world. Ellie placed the green stone eye into her bag she was carrying with the ghost eye in it.

Sophie and Ellie went to their neighbours house to find out if the ghost eye was the real one because as the note said there was a fake one and a real one “Ellie, do you have the note that was on the red chair?” Sophie asked. “Yeah why?” Ellie said “Because we need to find out if the ghost eye we have now is the real one” Sophie said, Ellie pulled out the note from her bag, and to find out if it was real was to ask the eye a question and if it responds it’s real if it doesn’t it’s not real

💡The reveal 💡
“Well, lets give it a try!” Sophie said “Are you the real Ghost Eye?” Ellie asked the ghost eye didn’t respond but it started glowing a bit “LOOK! Ellie!” Sophie shouted The moon was half way full so that meant they only had half an hour to find the real ghost eye! “Great! This isn’t it we only have half an hour to go!”

They searched everywhere for the real ghost eye but they just couldn’t find it, a strange looking man in a hat that covered his whole face “You, you, you have the real ghost eye in your hat, I know, I can see it with the green stone eye!” Ellie looked through the green stone eye and it allowed Ellie to look through the stone and see through the hat of the strange man!

The moon was now three quarters of the way covered! “We need to hurry and get that thing we only have fifteen minutes left!”Sophie said.Ellie jumped up on the man and took his hat of but just a that time she took the hat off the man threw her back to the ground, looking mad.Sophie creeped behind him and gave Ellie signals to get the real ghost eye.Ellie jumped onto the man again and luckily just in time snatched the ghost eye,then ran off

🌑 Full button moon 🌑
The moon was now seven eighths of thew way full! “Hurry, lets get going now Ellie!” Sophie said, they ran to their house as fast as they could,grass was starting to become white and then the world will start to disappear and only their house is the living thing.Their house is a trap so they can do nothing but let their mum sew buttons into their eyes and live in the evil world forever and never see their real parents again.

The moon is now fully covered and they had to go into the lounge room with the mirror that they traveled through. Both girls saw a shadow a weird spider looking creature with needle made hands and legs sitting on the chair. “ That's what happens…” The haunting creature said very, very slowly “ when the moon is a full,button,moon…” The creature said very slowly again

Ellie whispered to Sophie “It looks really creepy, that can’t be our evil mum can it?” Sophie replied “of course it would be her she’s the only parent left and we’re stuck in this evil world!” The chair  turned around with the weird creepy creature on  it.

To Be Continued

                                                                             



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  1. I hoped you enjoyed reading the second part of Ellie.There will be a third part coming up for my story so don't worry, reading lovers!It's not the end yet! tell me in the cpomments what you think about the story right now! Thanks!

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